Week 10#
I haven't done anything major to my website development. I have finished the majority of the coding, all I need to do now is write content for the pages. I have already finished the writing for the starship superheavy page however, I plan on writing more during the holidays. Here is a working link to my website. Also here some questions that some people can answer to improve my website.
Should I add more content for example has more rockets from different companies, important satellites that orbit, etc?
What is something I could improve on?
What is something people want to see?
chur.
Hi, I think your homepage on your website real good except when you go looking the words are a bit hard to read. But so far is looks really good.
ReplyDeleteHi Kobe, my name is Estella and I am a year seven at Gis Int school. I really like your website but some of it needs a bit of changing.
ReplyDeleteFor instance, do you have the copyright for those images of Rockets?
Did you write all of that information by yourself or did you copy and paste it?
It is quite hard to read the writing on the page about the dragon.
I know how hard it is to set a whole website up and I am not trying to say your website is bad, it just needs a few twinks and then it will be perfect.
Keep up the great and hard work!
Estella.H
Hello Kobe, while looking at your website, I noticed that the words on your Dragon page were quite hard to read and that the colour of the text was invisible in front of the background colour at the bottom. Apart from this, I think that your website so far is quite good. I was just wondering if all this information is in your own words. Well done so far!
ReplyDeleteHi Kobe my name is Capria i go to Gisborne Intermediate, i think you can made make your website writing a bit more small a and not make it white because when you read the website you can not see the writing but overall i think it looks great. From capria
ReplyDeleteHi Kobe,
ReplyDeleteI checked out your website and it's pretty good but on Dragon it was quite hard to read. Also on Dragon half of it's white and the text color is also white so I think thats the only thing you should work on. But besides that your website was quite good. I like that you a decent amount of information. I also liked the pictures you put in, unless there copyright claimed.
Good job Kobe :D
Hi Kobe, im Nina and i'm a year 8 at gisborne intermediate. I found your website super interesting and it has really great information on it. Even tho I found it great it does need a few tweaks to make it even better. Such as, the font it quite hard to read & understand, your background glitches on the dragon page. But overall I did enjoy it.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!
Nina.B
Hi kobe, my name is sylvie and I am a year 7 at gisborne intermediate school. I really like your website, it has really eye catching photos! But maybe make your writing easier to read.
ReplyDeleteHi kobe my name is Avie I attend Gisborne Intermediate School I really liked your website.you could work on adding more information and make your writing a different colour. Do you have the copyright for those images of Rockets?How did you learn how to code? Who taught you? Thanks Avie
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Hannah and I am a year 8 at Gisborne Intermediate. I really like the look of your website, it looks very appealing and made me want to read more.
I also think you have very good infomation about the starship super heavy. The only thing I think you should improve on is your dragon page. The infomation cuts off at the bottom and the image makes it hard to read. Other than that it is really good.
Hi Kobe, my name is Noah and I am a year eight learner at Gisnt school. So far it looks really good. But I do think you need to have a different font colour to your background. But keep up the great work.
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Hi Kobe
ReplyDeleteMy name is ollie and I go to gisint.I like you website but there are things you need to change.
You can not read the writing on the page dragon.Did you cope and paste the wiring.Did you copyright those images ?I will it is good just fix the whiting on page dongen.
Hi Kobe, I was just looking at your website and on the Dragon page i couldnt really read the words as they where the same colour as the background. Maybe next time you could highlight the words? I really like how you made it really clear about what you have finished and what you want to do more on. But it looks really good. From Chloe.
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